I was surprised to read about the history of bowling when I started reading this. I though to myself, wow, I never knew this stuff before, but I think that the history really ties into the rest of the essay well. There is a lot of clear descriptions which is also very nice for this essay, it adds more than just a simple interview. "
This is a lively group of women that are welcoming with warm and friendly smiles." (Williams 2) is great because I know what kind of people she is currently surrounded by. Especially the details about the woman from team Ruby that she speaks with, how some were friendly and others were not friendly and just gave her looks. That i find is important. Just because it makes it more real, because there are different kinds of people.
Within all of the description there are things you find out about the bowling alley itself. About how there are Men's and women's teams, as well as an arcade where all the kids go. Then even one of the owners mentions her kids bowl as well, i mean nothing less was expected probably, but it's nice that it is mentioned. The bowling alley is family and friend oriented. The clues are laid out very well, and the details are still great.
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